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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: In an English grave yard where lies are romantic

    heyy, thanks for all the reviews =] i'll try like, explain most of it =P my puncuations kinda awful for writing sorry, i write like i would say it, with ...

    Mar 14, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Summer Silences

    i'm the guitarist and song writer (the one with the hair =P) in april we'll be recording so hopefully be making something to put on youtube =] thanks for the ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Without Him

    the chorus is seemed to be used a bit too much throughout the song, without long enough breaks in between the verses. i like the way how the first and ...

    Mar 12, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: In an English grave yard where lies are romantic

    And the poets will struggle to find words to describe you, but fail in sobbing heaps where no light will shine upon them. cry o' tortured artists, as her beauty ...

    Mar 12, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Liar, Thief

    if it's to be used as lyrics it needs a rythym to it. but i like it =] it shows a lot of emotion, especially the 'bleeding on the tabe' ...

    Mar 12, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: We're So Blind

    imagery is amazing bit sounded a bit forced, but all together, its a very vivid set of lyrics the thought behind it is mazing Eva XxXxX

    Mar 12, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Summer Silences

    Summer Silences. Remember that night, Under the summer sky, Stolen by stars, We lay immortal. We stood against the world, But it was too strong for us, I don’t see ...

    Mar 12, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Everything

    This gave me goosepimpless Tis really sad, really emotional and powerful I've felt like this loads Lonliness is one of the worst things ever, especially like this =[ Theres not ...

    May 19, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Chinise Vampire Clan vs Vampire Europian society

    Name: Joker Gender: Male Race: European Appearance: Very tall, extremely thing, long messy black hair, wears tight black clothes and a large hat which varies. Carries a long silver and ...

    May 18, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I Always Thought

    I always wanted to think love is what your mother shows to you, Kissing is when you peck a cheek, Sex was a word used in songs that meant good ...

    May 11, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Music Art

    These are what happens when your grounded for a week with a camera phone and macromedia fireworks =] Walk The Line (Inspiration fromthe poster for the Johnny Cash film, walk ...

    May 11, 2008
  • Lyrics Re: Hello Kitty Love Life

    Again, at the moment this has simple chords, Em, c, g, Am with the lil' finger on the third fret, when you take it on and off, its got a ...

    May 11, 2008
  • Lyrics Re: No more crying

    It's very graphic, thats one of the things il ove about your work, theres lots of imagery in it, its a pleasure to read =] The lyrics really have so ...

    May 11, 2008
  • Lyrics Re: Without Him

    It doesnt seem to flow well, but the lyrics arevery good =] If anything, the chorus might be quite repetetive as its quite long and as its after each verse ...

    May 11, 2008
  • Lyrics Re: Miss me?

    I liked it, i just, dunno, didn't really feel it I got the idea but there's just something missing That may just be me, im into imagery, and for this ...

    May 11, 2008


If it wasn't for poetry, I couldn't express myself.
— Rosendorn